Raj is not used to writing salesy proposals, but seemed keen to try so I thought I'd give him a go.
This evening I opened up his latest draft, to review it before being sent to the client. On the first page, Raj had written an Executive Summary which began with:
As rightly told by prophet Kahlil Gibran “A little knowledge that acts is worth infinitely more than much knowledge that is idle” .
Goodness.
I love the deliberate inclusion of "rightly".
1 comment:
apricot zebra needs a young firebrand like that.
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